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FireDragon04
Joined: 24 Jan 2005 Location: Not So Jolly 'Old England
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Posted: Mon Mar 06, 2006 1:06 pm Post subject: FAR Future Armed Reinforcement ! Intro Trailer Movie !! |
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Hi, As most of you shall know, i create the movie series "Delta Base", Episode 4 is on hold at the moment due to actor shortages and recording time.
So ive made the intro to a 1 off movie after this season of delta base is complete. Its called FAR, the following movie will also be at the begining of the real movie, but only upto the first title screen, the rest is just in this little teaser.
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FAR ....."Future Armed Reinforcement"..... A colony of cryogenically enhanced marines, living in a dense city on the planet earth. The marines live just like humans but make no contact with any human other than there cryogenically enhanced marine peers. They are the reserve, powerful, army, and yet 1 group of cryogenically enhanced marines want to rule over this peaceful society, and stop this colony from fighting, and give up! But they find that the other cryogenically enhanced marines will not be over thrown without a fight...
Download/Watch the movie here
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Thanks for reading/watching, comments would be nice! |
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Paffoose
Joined: 19 Jan 2006 Location: Innovative Film
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Posted: Mon Mar 06, 2006 2:55 pm Post subject: |
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| The actual concept was good, but the trailer failed in making it exciting. I think the main problem was it was simply too slow and too long. You used loads of long shots of the spartans just walking around for a minute or so and then more long shots of spartans shooting at things you can't see. The narrator was good and the scrpit was suitable for a trailer; the editing wasn't too bad also; you simply need to condense it into a smaller space of time and just make it more exciting. |
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EternalSlayer
Joined: 03 Mar 2005 Location: GeeTee: EternalSlay3r
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Posted: Mon Mar 06, 2006 3:27 pm Post subject: |
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I didn't think all of the shots were too long, only one or two of them.
Good music, narrator, acting, I'm looking forward to the final film. |
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STX830
Joined: 10 Apr 2005 Location: 830 Productions
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Posted: Mon Mar 06, 2006 3:53 pm Post subject: |
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| You have been doing some really good videos lately it looks like. This tailor was good but some clips wore to long, the narrating to me was to quiet and could have used some more infests in the voice. Other than that good tailor, filming, editing just clean it up and that will help a lot. Looks like its going to be good keep up the hard work. |
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Omg A Fish
Joined: 23 Sep 2005 Location: GFX Battles-Wins: 9 Losses: 1
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Posted: Mon Mar 06, 2006 8:32 pm Post subject: |
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| Just wonderin, why call it F.A.R when there is a game called F.E.A.R just cuz I play that game alot it shoots to mind, you have probably never heard of F.E.A.R |
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